Daddy Taught Me Best by Vampiress632-- The First Place Winner

Vampiress632 is the author that won first place with her story Daddy Taught Me Best, featured in the Deathfic contest. It contains 1,171 words of thrilling suspense, with romance, lust, pretty women, and, oh, might I mention, death. The very first sentence of the story strikes your curiosity, and you get sucked into it from there on.

It starts in a bar, where her and Melanie first meet. After seven years of there glorious marriage together, something goes obscenely wrong and she's forced to do something to her beautiful, radiant wife that she'll soon regret.

this story was perfect for a deathfic. How everything was setup just really made the whole thing perfect. You can feel the violence pulsing from Melanie's wife the wfhole time.

The judges comments:

A_Girl_Called_Kill14: Hahahah, I love it. This seriously kicked ass.

MyChemicalKiss: It took a weird turn, and I loved it. I especially like how you showed the affection between the two, how perfect they are for one another. Fantastic job!!