can someone please?!??!

read my poem,
i NEED to know what poeple think,
it is one of the first peoms i have ever written,
(good comments would be nice!!)

(if you read it)
-give, read,(or re-post) the poem to that person, that you feel strongly about
♥

cause if you do have a person like that,
i suggest you read it,
then pass it on to them.:-)

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