Concerning "The Fate of a King"

Good Afternoon People. I was reading through 'The Fate of a King' again today as I posted another chapter and I realized something. The story is a little choppy probably because it is a role-play. I hope that that doesn't take away from the story in any way and I apologize if it is hard to read.

To the readers of this story. I play Rhine and Glint and other random characters that appear here and there in the story. The other author plays Talon, Niveus, and other characters that appear with them as well as some others that will be introduced later on.

I hope that you enjoy the story and if you have any advice that might be helpful in making future role-plays flow better than do tell!

Much thanks, it's_electric
October 17th, 2009 at 06:23pm