New story

Okay so I just wrote my first short story ever. It would be greatly appreciated if you guys would look at it and comment. Feedback will be greatly appreciated. I know that I am not the best writer. I'm probably not even good but maybe wit hyour guys feedback and comments I can work to make myself a better writer. Please take a look at it for me. Thank you guys so much. I can't wait to see the way you guys respond to it. Hopefully it is not terrible. Please don't be rude. Thanks again to all of you.

xoxo,
Justine.
December 17th, 2009 at 06:18pm