Okay so I just wrote my first short story ever. It would be greatly appreciated if you guys would look at it and comment. Feedback will be greatly appreciated. I know that I am not the best writer. I'm probably not even good but maybe wit hyour guys feedback and comments I can work to make myself a better writer. Please take a look at it for me. Thank you guys so much. I can't wait to see the way you guys respond to it. Hopefully it is not terrible. Please don't be rude. Thanks again to all of you.
xoxo,
Justine.