I need a Beta!

Hello! I have a creative writing, short story, that due tomorrow. Everything is done, except, I need someone else, to help edit, and help me with my overusage of commas (is it really that obvious?).

Anyways, just either contact me (by either, e-mailing me your e-mail, or likewise), so I can attach the document, instead of copy-and-pasting.

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I just got out of my Student-Led Conference, which is basically, I present my life, and my future. I talk about what I want to be, and how this year has been. It's all bullshit. Required by the state, if I want to graduate. I'm just happy it doesn't count this year, since I'm a Junior, but the next.

When I'm a senior, I have to get all dressed up, and present a powerpoint, that lasts for 20 minutes, about my future, and my learnings, in front of a committee of people. If I don't pass, I don't graduate.

How frightening does that sound?
May 17th, 2010 at 11:43pm