PLEaSe!!!!!!!!

ok guys im in the middle of writing a story. its called
how do you go on in life when all you know is that your dad's last name is..

and i want to know how its going.

i also have another one called

Life SUCKS!......Until your adopted.

please comment on them i want to know how they are doing.
please tell me if i need to add anything!!

GIVE ME YOUR OPINION!!!!

dont be shy about it just tell me.

later,

payton