what can i do to get ur attention?????

hey
my story doesnt seem to be pulling in readers. At the moment i beginning to give up on it. I need you lot out there to tell me otherwise. What can i do the make it better? What am i doing wrong?. To me my story is good its all coming from a dream i once had but i am very shit at putting dreams into words but i thought i was doing a alright job but its just not attracting alot people
anyways please comment
xoxo