Comment swaps!

Anyone up for a comment swap?

I just started a new story, The Way We Get By. It only has two chapters, so it's not totally developed yet, but you can tell me what you think so far.

Now, rules for comment swaps:

1. I don't read fan-fiction unless the character is being used in an original way so that I can detach myself from the fan-fiction basis of it. If it's about Gerard Way falling in love with an emo girl on tour, I won't read it, sorry.

2. SHORT STORIES/ONE SHOTS appreciated. Or stories that are just getting started. Don't ask me to comment on a 35 chapter story that's almost completed.

3. You comment first.

4. Leave me the name of the story in the comments of this journal.

5. If your comment is one sentence that says "Good story!" don't expect anything different from me.

Okay, ready? GO!