Story

So, I've decided to write a story. A long one. With chapters. And I don't consider myself very good at writing, but I need some more people to read it before I post it anywhere. If anyone would happen to like to read the first chapter and tell me what they think, just message me.
There's only one requirement. You have to have a Gmail account, as that makes things much easier.
And as I said, I don't consider myself very good, so please don't expect too much out of me. I've been told it's good, but I always want multiple opinions, no matter how much I trust the first one.
So, yea, thank you, and everyone have a wonderful day. =]