Comment Swap!

Today I took my very first SAT. It's kind of a monument; I feel pretty accomplished. It was the Bio subject test, but still...counts.

Anyway, back to the topic: Comment swap.

I'll do a swap for The Dust of Everyday Life ONLY. And here are a few rules for you:

1. No more than 5 chapters.
2. I prefer short stories to chaptered stories.
3. What you give is what you get. Short comment = short comment, and so on.
4. I will not read your Oli Sykes x Alex Gaskarth slash, sorry. Original fiction, PLEASE. Unless it's a fan fic with an original plot, in which case, I will ignore the fan fic part and treat it as original fiction.
5. Critique is appreciated just as much as compliments are.

Leave a comment below telling me what you would like me to comment on, and I'll do that in the next 20 minutes or so.

GO!