POEM, OR STORY SWAP!!

okay, so i have made a couple new poems, ''it didnt last forever'', and ''remember me'', that i would like some opinions on. i also updated on my story ''true loves first kiss'', so mibba, i am offering a comment swap. but there are a few catches to it:

1) you have to comment first
2) it has to be a comment worth reading. please no three word comments. they do me no good in improving my storys and or poems.
3)tell me what you would like to swap, and as soon as i get your comment, i promise to comment on your story and or poem.

thanks mibba, look forward to the comments and reading