Comment Swap

So....I just started this story with my friend Nodoluv. And I wanted to get early opinions and possible subscribers. It's called "Turtle", sorry I don't know how to add the link but you can just go through my profile. We only have 1 chapter and we would like to see if it intrigues anyone enough to subscribe/comment. So once you comment on my story, and hopefully subscribe, inbox me the name of the story you want me to read. And I'll give you my best constructive criticsm. have fun reading. I'll need as many opinions as possible. Thanks =D