Comment swap?

Hey everyone! I added a chapter to my and Edie15's story (inspired by something that really happened to me, i promise) I'd like some more feed back on it though, so if anyone is interested, maybe we could do a little comment swap? You read my story and tell me what you think and i'll do the same for you! maybe i'll get edie15 to read it as well! (maybe) so comment with the story you want me to read below and i'll read and comment (if it's good i'll subscribe) The story i want you all to read is Turtle :) happy reading!
-nodoluv <3