Comment swap, lovelies?

We all know that new stories or original fiction are hard to get commented on with the high number of stories on the site. So I was just wondering if anyone would like to participate in a comment swap with me. If so, I'd like you to read my story Of Heartache and Memories. It's an original fiction with just a prologue and a first chapter, so please read both, if that isn't too much to ask. Please leave constructive criticism. And I'm sorry, but I won't read any fan-fiction or smut. But any other original fiction is fine with me. Thanks in advance!