Well I posted two chapter from my story..

Well if anyone is intrested im anime or Naruto, i posted two chapters. It's an old fan fiction that I wrote years ago so if it needs some work then I would appreciate some feedback. I would posted the other chapters but first I would like to see if my story is worth posting. It's rated R so I guess only certain people can read it. If its not good then I'm not gona post that story all together. I'll just stick to regular love stories that aren't rated R maybe something rated PG 13. that would be better for those that aren't into sexual content. But if anyone can read it an tell me if its good enough to keep up I would very much appreciate the feedback!