Please help me with your opinions on this!(:

I got a start to a song-
pleeeease tell me how it is so far.
I have got a rhythm in my head.
Ok;

With every step I'm taking now
I'm wondering why I can't say how
How I feel
How do I deal
With the pain I am sure to cause you now

And I hate myself for loving you
Then changing my mind about that too
Damn I blew
All that I knew
And I thought that I did until POW-

I see your face
Then guild smothers the space, of my heart
Miss the days!, I could tell you the truth,
because I loved you-
-See your face!
Then guild smothers the space, of my heart
Miss the days!, I could tell you the truth,
because I loved you.

I led you on too far, I know
But I didn't see how this would go,
Guess I lied(to myself)
But now I'll hide
What my heart really feels-can't let it show

Should I tell him I made a mistake
It'l hurt him but I don't wanna fake
this anymore...
Oh I'm not sure
All I feel like doing is screaming NO...

But I see your face
Then guild smothers the space, of my heart
Miss the days!, I could tell you the truth,
because I loved you-
-See your face!
Then guild smothers the space, of my heart
Miss the days!, I could tell you the truth,
because I loved you.

Thats all so far. But what do you think?
Thanks:D!.