Comment swap! (Whole story?)

Hi, I'm looking for a bit more feedback on my and Edie15's story "Turtle" there are quite a few chapters, so i understand if you only read one or two but it'd be awesome if i could get at least one person to read the whole thing and comment! Leave a comment telling me which one of your stories you want me to read (the whole thing! I'll read it i promise) and i'll get to work on that! Also, please post meaningful comments! Tell me what you're thinking and feeling, don't just read other comments and say what they said (unless that's how you really feel) Thanks for your time, happy reading :D
-nodoluv <3