Would someone be willing to proofread a short story that I have written before I post it? It's for a contest, namely this one. It's completely written, I just want someone to proof read it for me.
I still need to come up with a title, so if anyone wants to help me with that... haha. Just joking. Not really.
It isn't often that I proofread anything, but this is slightly longer than anything I really write on a normal basis, and I couldn't see anything wrong with it. But, I'm sure there are a few small grammar mistakes.
It's around roughly 2,400 words. (I'm not exactly finished, it's at 2,122 now, and I still need to think of a conclusion here.)
It's pretty much just a descriptive essay with a story tied around it, but I don't think it's boring like a descriptive essay. I did well with not repeating adjectives.
c: Can someone help me here?
Edit; Okay. It's done now. It's only 2,302 words. Anddd. I'll comment swap something, since that's apparently a big thing on here now.
Damn you, bribery.... xD