Mibba I need help, and I need help now.

I need someone to review my college essay and give me an immediate response. The dead line for College applications is today and I sent my essay to my College Bound person and she still hasn't responded back yet. I need to turn this sh*t in now and she's taking too long. So I'm asking if someone can read over my essay and tell me if it needs more or if I need to explain more on any certain subject. Also I need this done now. So if you're willing to help say so in the comments and I'll PM you the essay.

So please kind Mibbians, help?