For those who read and commented on my story. 'I'll Him You're a Hero' And comment swap.

I had a a few comments about grammar on this story, all the errors have been fixed. The layout has been updated as well :)
I would like more feedback on it to see if I can improve it in anyway, so I am going a comment swap on it with any stories you want. I'll read most things unless it's rape or incest related. I don't mind if it's fan-fic or original fiction. I really need help on grammar, so please help me :).
I also need help on music choices as well, Can you recommend any songs or bands to listen to :)
Thanks Jodie x