Song In Progress.

This is a song I'm writing... It's WAY too cliche. I'll have to fix that... Ugh.
Here it is:

We all started out as diamonds in the rough
And quite frankly, darling, you're just another gemstone
So open your eyes, I'm polished and waiting
Now show me YOU can shine
Together, we're probably worth a million dollars.

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Like, I said; needs some major work.
And, hey, maybe it shouldn't be a song after all...
Maybe it should remain in the notebook with other failed attempts...?

Comments, please.

XO

P.S. I promise I'll update my story soon.