Comment Swap!?????

Hi everyone, I'm trying to write this story ,Captive, and I just finished the first chapter so I was wondering if any of you lovely people would be willing to read my chapter and tell me your thoughts, ask questions, express concerns or anything! (except insults) If you are willing please let me know which one of your stories you want me to read and comment on! I really need some feedback, I want the first chapter to be done before I move on to the second chapter! Let me know, thanks a bunch I really really appreciate any help.