Comment swap, comment swap, and then something about music.

So I have a new story I just posted, Morning Dreams and would be opened to do the swapping of the comments. Anyways, please nothing over about three or four chapters. I'm kind of trying out this whole writing in second point of view things, so anything critique on how it worked would be appreciated.

I do have to go to bed soon (anywhere from 20 to an hour from now) so if I don't get back to your story tonight, I'll try for tomorrow afternoon.

Then that something about music, lately I've been loving The Mountain Goats, but they're not as popular as I suspected. My absolute favorite song has to be The Young Thousands.

Anyways, yupp. Hope you'll do the comment swap and have a lovely evening.