Comment Swapping?

Okay, I'd like to do a comment swap for my story Picking Stitches, as I'd really like a bit of feedback on it. It's only got 8 chapters up so far, so it wouldn't be the biggest ask for you to read it all, but if you're short on time you could just read the first few chapters or something.

I expect you to comment first, and you will get what you give. Also, tell me which story you'd like me to comment on by commenting on this journal when you're done. (:

I'll get back to you all as soon as possible. Which will probably be in the next few hours, depending on when my classes finish. But I'll definetely get back to you all.