Comment SWAP!

I would really like for someone to read
Of a Boy Named Jack
and tell me what they think so far....

THE RULES:
-You comment FIRST
-Leave a comment here or on my profile of what you would like me to read
-Comments must be full of constructive criticism, advice, or just more than a sentence or two long
-I will only read up to SIX chapters of your story, if I like it, I might just keep reading

Yeah, I like romances and fantasy things, with hot boys and cute girls, but what can I say who doesn't?

... anyone up for a swap?