Comment swap!

I have been writing my story "Casimir Pulaski Day" for some time now and I need feedback because if it totally sucks I can't just keep writing. So if you've got time and you're a good person, could you read and comment? I promise I'll comment one of your story's or poems or whatever. Help me out guys. This is what mibba is for right? :)
Just to add, I feel extremely happy. And it's awesome. Even though my performances are over things are still ok and I feel really good. But the weather is just creeping me out. Like seriously, can you say global warming?
April 24th, 2012 at 04:00pm