I want your guys thoughts !

What do you think of my new story ? I really wanna know ! I see a bunch of people reading it but no comments or something ? I wanna know if it's good and you like it . I have a knew idea story I started it but no one read it ! So ima re write it it's gonna be a vampire story but yeah I'ma start writing it. But tell me what you think. I'm writing this story and than starting the other I'm totally in the mood to write soooo ! Leave comments on this or my profile ?! Doesn't matter which I was want feed back. :) thanks guys who do! I hope you all have a wonderful day !