Pitiful Attempts

Over the past few weeks I have attempted to write poems but I always got stuck and failed...I find inspiration in everything but I can never finish what I write...Some of the poems are really good too!!!! I attempt to complete the poems every day but I dont seem to be able to do it...Since I cannot complete the poems, I ask each and every one of you guys to turn these unfinished poems in to beautifully finished ones...

- A broken puddle of weeping despair
A shattered heart beyond repair

- Looking at the world through medieval eyes
A world where nobody lives and everyone dies
Every scream is heard and every woman cries
Falling into a pit where every sorrow lies

- Inside of me all bottled up
Lies a person many have yet to see

This is just some of them. Im too tired to put the rest. I would love to see what yall can do with these. I know that they are short but I have seen most of yalls work and it is awesome so I know you could do wonders with these. I will put more later...

(I would really love to see what yall come up with for the first two...They are my favorite!)

Shubharati (goodnight)!
August 25th, 2012 at 03:41am