Maybe This Is Good?

So I waas randomly inspired yesterday and I had to write. Fortunatley or not, my poem turned into a song. Some people like it, but I want your guys' opinions. This song is about a girl wih her lover, and her lover goes off to be with someone else after dissmissing the entire relationship. So, wronged girl goes after ex-lover's boyfriend...

Hey, There, Juliet (You Should Have)

Hey, there, Juliet, I got something to say to you.
You're making it out like I was a big fool,
when you're the one, you're the one
who said we were just having fun
The summer that I fell in love.

You say that I shoul have left you,
that I was being a big fool.
You never said I love you, back,
In your shitty black Pontiac
I guess I should have known
I should have never fell in love.

And now you're putting on a white dress
You're sayin' you're gonna marry him
After all those kisses in the backseat, backseat
Of your dad's car, last year
The summer that I fell in love.

You say that I shoul have left you,
that I was being a big fool.
You never said I love you, back,
In your shitty black Pontiac
I guess I should have known
I should have never fell in love.

Hey, there, Romeo, you know you should have known.
Juliet's down at the church tonight.
I know you're headed there,
But you should come over here
Before I put on my dress.
I know this is the last night, last time,
But I'm sorta in love.

You say that I shoul have left you,
that I was being a big fool.
You never said I love you, back,
In your shitty black Pontiac
I guess I should have known
I should have never fell in love.

Yeah, so, Romeo, I know you love her, though,
Do you remember years ago?
When we were both gone,
You were so alone.
Haha, I gotcha now.
And I know you know where we were that summer,
In her old Pontiac, in the back
Makin' love to your song
*Laughing* Yeah, I was sorta in love.

You say that I shoul have left you,
that I was being a big fool.
You never said I love you, back,
In your shitty black Pontiac
I guess I should have known
I should have never fell in love.

Oh, Romeo.
Dear Juliet,
You should know,
You should know;
I gotcha now,
And you may wonder how
It happened so fast
Sweet love won't last.
Cause I've caught you now and you know
You should've never fell in love.

You say that I shoul have left you,
that I was being a big fool.
You never said I love you, back,
In your shitty black Pontiac
I guess I should have known
I should have never fell in love.

They say revenge is a dish best served cold:
And your hearts in vain,
You should have taken it slow,
Danced in the rain.
Now rain is snow, and the sheets are cold.
You should have never fell in love.
Oh,oh.
Oh, oh.
The dangers of love.
Oh, oh.
Oh, oh.
I caught you in love.
Oh, oh.
Oh, oh.
To have and to hold,
Now I gotcha in love.
Oh, oh.
Oh, oh.
You should have never fell in love.