First Story!

Yup its only a oneshot but I made it up as I went along!
It's probably naff but I'd really appreciate if someone read it and commented, 'cause that would help alot for me to improve!!
Like I said, I made it up as I went along.
So please read my oneshot "Keeps Me Going". I would post a link but I don't know how =[
Sorry if Ime rambling!
Love & Hugs
GPW xoxo