A Song for the broken,the beaten, and the damned

Dear journal,
I just wrote ths really good song(well I think so) ad I don' know whatto do with it.....sigh....well want to read it? Okay, here it is.
Vengence is the sweetest feeling in the world(even if you're already dead)
[VERSE ONE]
The night of my death,
All your lovers quake,
A forsaken quest,
To find the perfect death,
Oh,well I’m coming back,
Coming back to your place,
You better watch your back,
Every chance you get,
No time for regret,
Regretting all you lost,
Ah, well,
You thought I was a lost cause…
[CHORUS]
Yeah, you broke my heart,
But I will shatter yours,
The blood drained from the lips,
Comes from the soul,
My heart beats less than dull,
I’ll take your lasting breath,
Just before your death,
No time for saying sorry,
That time has already passed…
[VERSE TWO]
Oh are you getting it now?
Yeah well maybe not,
Well I’m Stirring,
In this coffin you put me in,
I’m gonna get my revenge,
I remember the night you left,
I thought you were gone for good,
But you came back for one last kiss…
[CHORUS]
[VERSE THREE]
When you stabbed me on the back,
I whispered I would get you back,
That promise,
I will keep,
Drigging at my grave,
With a broken heart,
This will be the start,
Of the end…
[CHORUS]
[FOURTH AND FINAL VERSE]
Oh well,
I’m almost out of this grave,
Are you gonna be brave?
Your heart beats a little faster,
Just before we meet,
Well, coming out now,
Are you near this place?
(from here back-up singers start singing chorus)
Oh well, coming out now,
Are you near this place?
Hey, now, coming out now,
Are you near this place?
Oh, well,
Hey! Hey! Hey!
Oh, well, coming out now,
Are you near this place?
Hey, Hey, Anyway,
You’ll soon be living in this grave!
September 27th, 2007 at 06:53am