Comment Swap

Hey everyone!

I was wondering if anyone would like to do a comment swap?

I posted some of my original fiction and I'm really curious what people will think of them seeing as I posted mostly fanfiction in the past (well still do)

Most of them are fantasy, urban fantasy or apocalyptic fantasy.

My stories I want read:
-Green Fire
-Cursed
-Collateral Damage
-Ashen Sky

Stories I would like to read:
-Original Fictions
-You may suggest a fanfiction but I'd like to approve the fandom first

I have tomorrow off of work so I'll be able to read stories :]

Types of feedback I'm looking for:
-Constructive criticism
-Your thoughts on pacing, dialogue and characterization

Just like the comment swap feature I would like a 1 comment for 1 comment and a lengthy comment at that.

Thanks! :D