PLEASE CAN I HAVE UR ATTENTION!!

i have started this new story about 3 days its called Romance is at fever pitch. I thought it was a good idea but i have had 4 readers so far and NO comments. which is a little upsetting because i thought the plot was a good idea so please u give it some kind of comment tell me if i am going wrong plz but i was also thinking of having someone co write it with me if ur interested please contact me thank you

please please try and give me a chance i know i am not the best writer but i can improve with feedback please
xoxo