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haha. they very much do :]

Haha, yes they do!(:
They're my current obsession.

lolme too...
i can't get to sleep.

and clouds.
your avatar pic is really pretty

yeah really

i love All Time Low!
and marble cheese is heaven!
whats up?

haha it's Elena...I was really mad at that part too. I like hated Damon in the first book, but after reading the second I loved him for some reason

yeah vampire diaries is pretty much my favorite book, in case you couldn't tell =)

haha what about...
what are you doing?
lol

hey! what's up?

Yeah. My favourite song of Tokio Hotel is either Monsoon or Dont Jump.

Well, if you need any help, don't hesitate to ask.

Well, I wish you the best of luck for your stories/poems/lyrics. :D

Haha, well said my friend. :D
I'm going to have to try it someday...
How's your story coming along? :o

So I've heard. I really like cheese. And cake is awesome.
So cheese+cake must equal amazing! I just haven't tried it.

My mom doesn't either so I probably got that from her.
Yeah, I get that a lot. I've never had cheesecake either, but one of these days I'll have to try it.

Haha, well, believe it or not, I hate pie.

Stanza form's purpose is just to make poems look more pretty, more aesthetically pleasing.

Stanza is to a poem as a paragraph is to an essay.
This is stanza form..:
Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
The sky is red,
and the clouds are blue.

In stanza form, every ending of a sentence makes a new line. I think this is what your poem would look like...

As i wait for the pain to come,
you find me laying here.
You stay with me and i wonder
'why do you care?' .
you stay and gaze into my brown eyes.
The pain comes and you let me die.
before i go my last thought to you is
'i love you'.

I'm not really sure.. cause it isn't my poem. but that's what stanza is like.
Read some of my poems, those are better examples.

Ohh. I was thinking that it would be good in song form.
"Love Is Dead" was a good poem.