pins and needles. / Comments

The results are in! :)

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hey. thanks for using the layout, telling me you're using, leaving a link and leaving the credits on. [x

You should!
Plus, you'll never get better if you don't write, and the feedback here can be pretty awesome.
I suggest getting a beta of some sort, they really help too. :)

HEEEEEY(:
Thanks!
Do you write at all?

Nah, just curious about things. ^_^

Thank you for your lovely comment.
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Research my dear one. I did a lot, and watched a film called [i]Vivah[/i] which has a good bit of hindu wedding ceremony towards the end.

Wow, that sounds amazing. I wish I could draw! Well, I kinda can, I just haven't got the patience to sit down and practise. And I'm awful at faces, so I just give up with them and leave them blank.

I'd love to go to Japan. Tokyo looks amazing - everything so intense and close together. And bright as well. I've grown up mostly in the country, so I'm looking forward to living in the city next year for university.

Yeah, for a couple of years. My dad's a doctor so he went out to do some missionary work, and obviously we went with him. (We being my brother, mum and myself!)

Aw, thank you! I really tried to work this one through a bit, you know? Sometimes I feel like I just churn the chapters out, and that's a little sad. I've never been to Mexico or India, but I lived in Africa for a couple of years with my family when we were little, so it was kind of based on personal experience.

i'd just thought i'd tell you that when i was little, my older brother got really mad at his furbie and threw it down the stairs... and it still worked. those creepy little owl things!

Er, no, there has been no 'big night' as such, as of yet. This issue will be explored a little in the next chapter. ^_^

Sadly, yes. It's always like giving up a little part of myself. When I first publish, when I give it to someone I know really well to read, and then when you finally let go of it...

I have it planned out in my head, and there's a good few chapters worth left, but I'm not sure how it'll evolve. It could be that I write only 5 or so more chapters to what I've already got, it might be that I end up writing 50! I really don't know. It will end though, it's not a completely endless rant!!

ahh!! you reccomended (i can't spell) my story! i <3 u!! okay, go back to chapter we're late for a very important date and take a look at the author's note.

Thankies for the heads-up on that sentence! I'll go have a check.

Thanks for the story comment! :D

Glad you liked the critisism! I'm always a little wary that when people ask me to read stuff they just want more readers and get radgy when I criticise anything, even if it's constructive.

Haha, I'm sure I will some day! Most of the stuff is out the way now, so I'll probably get a moment this week. ^_^