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  • SecondHeartbeat

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    Thanks again for the comment.
    I know, it was a boring chapter. But, I'm glad you caught that there are important facts mentioned in this chapter. The next one will be out much sooner, and I'm hoping it turns out as exciting as I'm envisioning it.
    November 27th, 2010 at 06:46am
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    Whoa calm down! It's ok. Seriously lol. Just like everything you said. I can't write perfectly everytime and it was just coz you expected something different.
    November 17th, 2010 at 01:17am
  • ZombieDust

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    Hi again.
    I agree with you, it was significantly shorter than my previous chapters, but I wanted to leave it at a certain point rather than go through with showing the characters begin their trip, because that's a long section. So if I did continue the chapter would have been quite long and I don't thinkanyone would have bothered to read it.
    Thankyou for the comment though, I wasn't very pleased with how this chapter turned out so I'm very glad you liked it :)
    November 15th, 2010 at 06:24am
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    Well ur story comment made me sad for the first time ever :(
    November 15th, 2010 at 05:24am
  • ceerand

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    Welll thankies for the comment again! And haha, I was listening to the song right then and i was like *GASP* THIS IS PERFECT!
    :)
    November 11th, 2010 at 03:41am
  • shades of twilight

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    chapter 2 is up (:
    & thanks I'm glad <3
    November 11th, 2010 at 03:37am
  • SecondHeartbeat

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    Thanks. :]
    I'm actually working on the next update now, I'm hoping to have it out tomorrow.
    November 10th, 2010 at 11:48pm
  • ceerand

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    And, if you want a story to read, it doesn't have Avenged Sevenfold in it, but its an original.. Do you like originals..? I know some people don't. But its the last story on my story page, The Name of the Game: Kill.
    November 10th, 2010 at 09:09pm
  • ceerand

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    Well I'd be glad to! :) And, just a question, what's been your favorite scene in the story so far? Just kina wondering:)
    November 10th, 2010 at 08:37pm
  • britahnee

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    thank you for your totally awesome comment on Love This Pain!
    You are amazing :'P
    November 10th, 2010 at 11:40am
  • ZombieDust

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    Hellooo.
    Thankyou VERY much for the story comment, I wasn't aware that it was that great but I'm very glad you liked it :D Comments mean alot and your one was awesome, appreciate it very much. :)
    November 10th, 2010 at 06:09am
  • shades of twilight

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    OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY COMMENT.
    jussayin'. (:
    the next chapter is dealing with 4 POVs so be ready for text text text and text (:
    November 10th, 2010 at 06:07am
  • SecondHeartbeat

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    Do you know how much i officially love you now? Words can not describe it. I'm so glad that you recognized that I had planned the story before I started writing it, and am not just writing nonsense. I've put so much thought into this, and the fact that you have such good things to say about it, really means so much to be. It's great that you appreciate all of the different characters. I do hope that I will continue to keep your interest.
    xo
    Madison
    November 10th, 2010 at 03:21am
  • Thegreatunspoken

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    You are the best!! Thank you so much!! <3
    Your comment means so much to me, I really appreciate it. Oh and the rotation won't keep happening, it's only used to introduce the main characters to the reader.
    November 10th, 2010 at 01:03am
  • SecondHeartbeat

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    Is it to much if I ask if you'll check out another story of mine?
    It's called To Die Unknown.
    If you can, I would really appreciate it.
    Thank you.
    November 9th, 2010 at 11:13pm
  • ceerand

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    I... I think I love you. (friend way of course! :D)
    Thank you for the comments soo much, we totally love them! Especially how you tell us what you like and what you don't! :)
    November 9th, 2010 at 11:02pm
  • ceerand

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    Thanks for the comment, but you might want to go back and read it again, cause I added more in there... A lot, cause I realized, "Oh shit, this doesn't explain anything that Danielle's chapter has in it." So I went back and fixed it:)
    November 9th, 2010 at 09:38pm
  • mochi.

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    Thanks for the comment. We really appreciate it! (:
    November 9th, 2010 at 08:51pm
  • SecondHeartbeat

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    Thank you for your comment. I respect the fact that you were very descriptive, and honest. It's not often that you come across a person who is willing to give you honest criticism.
    Hopefully, we shock you with the later chapters and keep you interested.
    November 9th, 2010 at 06:05pm
  • Thegreatunspoken

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    Hello,
    I know that you are always amazing at tell people the honest truth about their stories, and I have this new one. It's my very first co-write, and I would love to have you critique it. It's called the Disciples of the Unseen.
    November 9th, 2010 at 02:52am