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  • aquarian_lotus

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    i was actually thinking about that, but i couldn't
    bring myself
    to kill lee lol.
    and i know ppl would beat the crap
    outta me if i killed seth.
    August 5th, 2009 at 05:35pm
  • sky lark.

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    well, i put out a new chapter and attempted to squeeze in a bit of action. :tehe:
    but i know that it'll cease to be boring, which is good. i think. aha.
    but if you could check it out and let me know what you think, i'd appreciate it like a lot. :XD
    August 5th, 2009 at 04:21am
  • Make Boys Cry

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    I decided to mention my light saber as an attempt to make the hate mailers think twice. Lol. :-p
    August 5th, 2009 at 03:20am
  • aquarian_lotus

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    im srry >.<
    lol
    wat were u hoping for?
    August 5th, 2009 at 02:59am
  • aquarian_lotus

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    she doesn't go with anyone.
    she likes both of them so she just
    screws around with both lee and seth.
    ya get me?
    she's a whore lol
    August 4th, 2009 at 11:34pm
  • aquarian_lotus

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    well its simple.
    the vampires go crazy because
    the werewolves put sum shit in the pills they were taking.
    then lee and the other wolves kidnap/save aiden, lori, and iris.
    blah blah.
    they are at the wolves big hideout.
    the rest is about the vampires & slayers trying to get them back.
    the girls get saved, krim kills lee's mom charlotte.
    after the whole battle lee, wade, and kariin are allowed
    to go back to the academy bcuz they rlly weren't all that bad to begin
    with. it was mostly charlotte.
    as for relationships,
    zacky and lori are all lovey dovey. and they have a baby boy named cain.
    seth and aiden dnt stay together bcuz she can't decide between him
    and lee/
    so they r just friends who like each other.
    nathan breaks up with iris but she and wade like each other so
    its okay.
    and yeah their school lives just go on normally the way it
    used to.
    the end lol.
    August 4th, 2009 at 08:25pm
  • em.anderson2009

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    haha kay. but wadda u mean about actions?
    August 4th, 2009 at 03:13pm
  • em.anderson2009

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    haha thanks for the comment!
    of course you knew you sly dog.
    i wonder how :]
    August 4th, 2009 at 12:44pm
  • sky lark.

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    Thanks for the constructive comments on my story, [i]Imprint[/i]. I appreciate that you're trying to help me get better. :] I just wanna let you know that I'm taking your advice to heart and I'm trying to speed up the action; I've always had issues with dragging on and on... Haha. But I promise the next update will be full of stuff! So don't give up on it, please? :D

    Also, this is kind of a spoiler, but you might think nothing's going on in the chapters because I'm brewing a subplot that's really going to suprise people. So, I kinda know what I'm doing, but not really. ;] Which is why I appreciate your feedback. :D
    August 4th, 2009 at 05:25am
  • xThexMessengerx

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    A story dedicated to her sounds really good, but It would have to be awhile off, my emotions are just too raw right now to write anything other than blubberings.
    But thank you for the idea.
    August 4th, 2009 at 04:04am
  • aquarian_lotus

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    honestly i felt towards the end i kinda made it half-assed but thank u..
    ill email u future chapters:)
    August 1st, 2009 at 01:41pm
  • xThexMessengerx

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    Actually I explained why it was on hold in my profile.
    It's okay.
    July 31st, 2009 at 07:06pm
  • xThexMessengerx

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    Hey Mathia,
    Thanks for the story comment. :-D
    Good to hear new readers like it.
    and I'm sure you have just as much creativity and imagination in you. Hell, i really don't think I'm as creative as you think. The thought that got me writing that story was 'hmmm, what would happen if a werewolf were stuck in a pound?' Very simple, not even plotted out. Just a spark. You build on from there.
    Oh and that's the first time anyone has ever used the phrase 'when I get to your age' to me before. Kinda stunned me there for a moment then I busted out laughing.
    July 31st, 2009 at 09:35am
  • em.anderson2009

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    hay thanks for the comment!
    i would have added more detail, except i dont reallly no how to...
    thanks again, emily
    July 30th, 2009 at 05:26am
  • Throw.My.Faith

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    Thank you for the comment. Your comment made me laugh haha. I promise, cross my heart, that as soon as I reach 118 comments I will update immediately. I'm writing the next chapter right now. I have like 13 chapters written already but I'm squeezing in the chapter I'm writing now. It's going to be soo long. It's six pages on Microsoft Word and I'm not even done writing it yet. It's the longest chapter I've ever written 0.0
    July 30th, 2009 at 05:23am
  • PhoenixAngel

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    It because I delete a chapter which was me moaning about how my wii keep deleting my story before I could upload it. Chapter 6 became Chapter 5 and chapter 7 became Chapter 6. I think it be fine once I've upload another chapter
    July 27th, 2009 at 02:50pm
  • em.anderson2009

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    Thank you for the comment!
    July 26th, 2009 at 08:40am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    hey i dunno if you read it already but i updated =]
    what's up
    July 25th, 2009 at 07:15pm
  • escapethekait26

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    it's cool. it took a while for me to get this fat....a lot of the time i was really begging for comment....the this past week, things just took off.
    July 24th, 2009 at 06:12pm
  • escapethekait26

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    yes, i did! because you guys are soooo awesome!!!
    July 24th, 2009 at 05:16am
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