Thank you very much for the story comment. If I wasn't stricken down to just three chapters (the contest only allows the story to be a one, two or three chapter story); it would be a lot better of a story, haha. Maybe I'll write something else like this eventually :)
Aww that sucks, at least you don't have a virus, I am in safemode of my comp right now so I can go online and write because the thing won't let me open word. But thanks and I hope chapter four comes up soon :D
i just left a comment, it was different for me at first but the way you write grew on me and i really like it, especially that third chapter it was cute :D
Well I think those critics are f-d up, and there's nothing wrong with something being old, writing evolves, my writing's stayed the same recently and I'm proud of it, I think that you should write what you want because its what you want. So if your trying to change your writing that may be why its driving you crazy. You can't change something you love, if it's not meant to be changed :)