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  • Oogie

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    can I ask why hoofbeat?
    March 11th, 2010 at 09:39pm
  • Oogie

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    *giggles*
    I'm not gonna be a teenager anymore scary O.O
    thank you by the way
    March 11th, 2010 at 09:29pm
  • Oogie

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    *clears throat*
    it's mah birthday tomorrow!
    March 11th, 2010 at 08:26pm
  • Colorful Reader

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    I am going to have to get off soon, my mom is sending me to my room for bed. I'll probably watch a movie. Anyway, bye. : ( Have fun reading my story when you get the chance.
    March 11th, 2010 at 02:50am
  • Colorful Reader

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    I just posted my story. It is informational so it might not be as interesting.You can read it when you like. I find it fascinating, but I take criticism well, so.. FEEL FREE TO CRITIQUE!
    March 11th, 2010 at 02:48am
  • Colorful Reader

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    That was amazing. I loved your details and your description of the horse. That kept my eyes glued to it. ^. ^

    (p.s cute smiley)
    March 11th, 2010 at 01:56am
  • Colorful Reader

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    That is awesome. I will robably post mine this weekend. I will read it if you'd like me to. : )
    March 11th, 2010 at 01:38am
  • Colorful Reader

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    Me is back!!!!!!!
    March 11th, 2010 at 01:26am
  • Colorful Reader

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    Sorry I know you just got back, but I have to go home I will be back on in ten to fifteen minutes. I promise. I know what I am going to write about; ghosts! I am working on the first chapter. I will be back soon. Promise. :)
    March 11th, 2010 at 12:54am
  • Colorful Reader

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    I am back, but if you are still studying, I'll just work on my story. I decided to go with an informational story first, just to start off easily.
    March 11th, 2010 at 12:01am
  • Colorful Reader

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    I have to go for about ten minutes. I have to play with my cousin outside, but I will be back soon. I promise.
    March 10th, 2010 at 10:08pm
  • Colorful Reader

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    Thanks. I am still searching for ideas for stories. I thought of space, but it didn't click when I started writing it so I might write an informational story first. I am good at informational stories and they are easy to write. I am good at descriptions.
    March 10th, 2010 at 10:04pm
  • Colorful Reader

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    I am one of the best writers in my class, but I am still improving my writing skills. Thanks, I will take that advice and I will probably be on a whole lot more because I am not grounded.
    March 10th, 2010 at 09:55pm
  • Oogie

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    Kristy!!!!!!!!!!!1
    *huggles*
    March 10th, 2010 at 02:10pm
  • Colorful Reader

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    Well, I am trying to post one, but I am nervous because I involve mystical creatures in this one. It is actually informational because I am talking about fairies, but it is also a mix with story. I also am writing about space which might be the first one I post. Sorry I did not reply yesterday, my stepdad wanted the computer and I had to get off. I'll be on after school though. I will just kick my brother off for a bit.
    March 10th, 2010 at 01:10pm
  • Colorful Reader

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    Hi, I am back.
    March 9th, 2010 at 11:31pm
  • Twiggy.

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    Aw, thank you :) I kind of miss writing that story :’)
    Oooooo, you’re reading ‘A Slow Dance’ as well now :D thank you for your comment on that too!
    It isn’t really my favourite, to be honest. I think I remember you asking if it had any connection to the Holly story. Well, it was originally supposed to, but then I changed my mind because it has more to do with Oliver. I just ended up taking the idea of Tom being mute as I sort of concluded in the end of Holly. It’s an entirely different story though now, but really, not exactly my favourite so far.

    I’d love to see some of your writing :) Do send it, and of course I could tell you what to improve on :D
    March 9th, 2010 at 03:33am
  • Colorful Reader

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    Hi, I would love to be your friend and I might need help once in a while.
    March 9th, 2010 at 12:26am
  • TheDeadOfTheNight

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    What do you read?
    March 5th, 2010 at 06:22am
  • Twiggy.

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    Aw, I'm glad you like it :)
    Do you write at all? :)
    March 4th, 2010 at 10:43pm