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  • Nikki Lund

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    oh daaaarn, i neeeeed to read it even more now! :D
    - but don't misunderstand me, i didn't stop reading 'cause i thought it was boring, i just only found the time for the first chap there, but when i get more time (time to read) i will absolutely check it out! XD

    btw, it says on your profile that you've been a tokio hotel fan for 7 years! รถ how can that be true?? lol, did you know them as devilish or? :D
    May 16th, 2010 at 01:25am
  • Nikki Lund

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    oh yeah, now i get it! :D
    that would be awesomelee!! :)

    btw. i checked out your story, as you might have seen, but i'd only read the first part of it, but woah, i looove the way you write! it seems so realistic, as if it's myself thinking, as if it's put in my head, if you know what i mean? it's really cool! :)

    yeah, i know what you mean. :D
    May 16th, 2010 at 12:36am
  • Nikki Lund

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    thank you soo much, as said, i'm really thankful for the tips, but one question; do i make it sound as if they're dating? - 'cause they're not, i tried to make it sound as if they're only meeting to get to know each other, 'cause i thought that the dating-immediately-thing was too ridiculous, and unrealistic. xD

    and of course i'll check out your stories! :D
    - what do you mean with one-shots, two-shots and three-shots? (never heard about itXD)
    May 16th, 2010 at 12:20am
  • Nikki Lund

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    hey, thank you very much for your comment on my story! i'm really thankful for the tips! - and yeah, i know that the first two chapters isn't so well-written, but i will try to use your tips and hopefully make it work out. :)
    May 16th, 2010 at 12:07am
  • FightnTheUrge2LuvU

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    um...bill, u can make up the girls name..it doesnt matter to me! um...blonde hair, green eyes, tall, skinny, scene kid,16, and yes 'steamy sex scene'...and aww ur so nice for doing this :):):):):):)
    May 16th, 2010 at 12:01am
  • FightnTheUrge2LuvU

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    what kind of info do u need exactly? and aww thankyou ur so sweet!!!!! :):):):)
    May 15th, 2010 at 06:29pm
  • Nikki Lund

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    'ey, if you're a tokio hotel fan, i think you'll like this ff;

    http://stories.mibba.com/read/274020/jetzt-liegst-du-hier-billtom-kaulitz/

    :D
    May 15th, 2010 at 06:09pm
  • FightnTheUrge2LuvU

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    aww yes thatd be very sweet of u if u made one for me :):):):):) <3
    May 15th, 2010 at 01:54am
  • gidjet363

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    Haha, well i'm kind of busy at the moment, but i'll take a look at them as soon as i get the chance.
    I've decided tonight that i need to start writing again to curb my growing facebook addiction =P
    And plus, it's nice to feel needed.
    But i will definitely check them out when i get the chance.
    May 11th, 2010 at 11:49pm
  • gidjet363

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    Hey! Thanks for the add! Sorry it took so long! =]
    May 11th, 2010 at 10:13pm
  • lifeline

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    Hmm. How do you feel about your character being Nicole Aston, nicknamed Nikki or something? (I'm going off of a play on your name [or at least what I think your name is, judging by ... your info, haha]) I'm just not a particularly big fan of characters having wonky names, but I'm sure I can work in a quirky nickname if you'd like or something. :)
    May 11th, 2010 at 03:16am
  • lifeline

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    I actually wasn't planning on having any of Addy's friends be in a relationship with any of the boys from TH in all honesty. I'm just not a big fan of a group of friends hooking up with the entire band, you know? But I can work on it and see if anything comes about-- I'm just not making any guarantees, so I don't want you to get annoyed or anything, haha.

    Errm, other then that, what name did you want to go by? And I'll try to base your character off of what you've given me; I don't know if I can make it be word for word, but it'll definitately have some of your characteristics in there.
    May 10th, 2010 at 02:07am
  • lifeline

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    For Chasing Thunder, I'm going to make you as one of Addy's friends, if that's alright with you ?
    May 10th, 2010 at 01:28am
  • lifeline

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    Uhm, I can definately put you in Chasing Thunder- I have a character that I can take out and place you in instead. But I'm not so sure about Glitter. I don't think I have any vague characters that can be replaced until the sequel at the earliest.

    That being said, if you don't mind being in CT, I can put you in that one. Just send me the info you'd like included and I'll try to sort it all out and put you in. :)
    May 10th, 2010 at 12:00am
  • lifeline

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    Erm, which story were you thinking of ?
    May 9th, 2010 at 10:26pm
  • lifeline

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    Thank you so much for both of your comments; I appreciate it so much, you've no idea. I'm writing CT right now and I intend to post tonight if I get far enough in it. And in regards to Glitter, I'm just waiting for a few more comments before I update again. :)
    May 9th, 2010 at 12:14am
  • losing control.

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    Thanks for the story comment (:
    May 4th, 2010 at 08:57pm