and thank you for the comment, its my first story and i need all the help i can get. to be honest i thought it was understandable but fnx coz i need to know if everyone understands it and wot parts aren't clear :D
welcome to mibba! I hope you like it, and if you have any questions, feel free to ask me! I'm Kayla by the way. oh and, (of course, since I'm me) if you have any time to check out my story and comment, I would really appreciate it.
Thank you for the comment on my short story :)
Yeah I wrote it for my creative writing class in my senior year of high school...my teacher loved it and hopes I can get it published some day :)
Oh and no problem for adding the information in with it also...for I figured it'd be better if the readers knew what happened on that lone island on the coast of Maine :)