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  • Scripted_Siren

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    thanks for the comment... what actually happened was after putting the story away for a bit, i decided to start again, and actually redid a lot of it, so i cleared out all the old chapters so i could get a fresh start, and uploaded the new ones, then mibba crashed and deleated it all, so i'm starting it again, again lol
    April 19th, 2012 at 03:12am
  • GGGG.

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    Thank you for the comment! :D
    April 1st, 2012 at 07:35am
  • mcrmom

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    Please be patient with me. "Daylight" is about Petula and her band, so it starts with her. But Viv is her aunt, and also central to the narrative. Thanks so much for reading! I really appreciate any and all comments!
    March 22nd, 2012 at 12:07pm
  • TheSun

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    I'm sure it does seem improbable but, like you said he is an extremely distrusting character. Also I wrote it this way because it helps the story develop in another way. I''m glad that you like my story and thank you soooooo much for the compliments. You have no idea how much they mean to me. So anyway thank you and I hope you continue to enjoy my story as much as I am enjoying writing it : )
    March 2nd, 2012 at 03:54am
  • Stumble into the Sun

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    Her name actually was finished before the story was. It evolved from a dream I had, and took off from there in a direction that I can barely understand. Actually...it wasn't supposed to represent that, but that is an awesome idea. I always wonder if something are accidentally in literature that we take as brilliance. Anyway, thank you for the comment! (:
    February 9th, 2012 at 04:37pm
  • GGGG.

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    Thank you for the story comment! (:
    January 28th, 2012 at 10:33pm
  • yourseatisstolen

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    Perhaps, perhaps something sinister is in the air! You'll find out soon enough :D

    Thanks for commenting :D
    January 11th, 2012 at 04:59am
  • QueenErinI

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    I'm glad you approve my music taste anyway haha. Most people give me crap for listening to things that they've never heard of. You're awesome!
    January 10th, 2012 at 03:57pm
  • GGGG.

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    Yeah I put up something new that's the same concept, just more mature.
    January 10th, 2012 at 06:00am
  • yourseatisstolen

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    Thanks for the comment :D. Grizzly Bear is one of my favorite bands! I'm glad to hear someone else in the Mibbasphere likes them too!
    January 3rd, 2012 at 07:39am
  • bona drag.

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    Thank you very much for the story comment. I greatly appreciate the feedback. :)
    December 5th, 2011 at 12:28am
  • static light

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    Oh thank you, I'm flattered!! I seriously appreciate your feedback, it's so important and fantastic to hear what you're thinking :) I completely understand what you mean with feeling irritated by Cassie- if we're being honest I struggle to write the story because of her character, she's quite selfish and inconsiderate! As for seeming melodramatic in the last chapter i actually based it loosely upon true events (as hard as it seems to believe the puke scene is toned down... this person did not handle it well at all.) I think that's why it's so annoying because they brought it upon themselves?
    Anyway thank you again and sorry for the long rambling comment! I'll update soon :)
    December 4th, 2011 at 11:50am
  • LettersToNormandy

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    Thank you for the comment! And thank you tons for reading and being patient with me!
    July 2nd, 2011 at 11:28pm
  • kyumi2

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    Thank you so much! I'll update soon as I can, lol
    May 29th, 2011 at 01:04am
  • Helvius Cinna

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    Ok good! I thought I was loosing my mind, but that's interesting I really thought it was a fan fiction! Nevermind my thing about changing the genre! But yes, I'm going to marry Yannis...hahaha right. I'll settle for marrying Foals, yes the entire band.

    And please, I want you to update it soon! :)
    May 20th, 2011 at 01:12am
  • Missyliina

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    Haha. Thank you for enlightening me! (: I have to check them out! (:
    May 19th, 2011 at 05:10am
  • Missyliina

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    Haha. What? I got lost! lol I've never heard of those bands.
    May 12th, 2011 at 08:08am
  • Missyliina

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    That's a great song! What other bands do you like?
    May 12th, 2011 at 07:19am
  • Missyliina

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    My sister she loves them, but I really fell in love with the song Talk Show Host & Exit Music For Film from the movie Romeo & Juliet. Then I heard the rest of their music & I was hooked. (: How about you?
    May 12th, 2011 at 07:15am
  • Missyliina

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    The title yes! & Thank you. Not too many people I know, know about RadioHead.
    May 12th, 2011 at 06:53am