ew. melting doesn't sound good. it actually makes me think of a person full of plastic surgery being placed near a fire. i don't think that's good for their health... they might actually melt...
ohhh. i would do that, but then i get anxious for opinions and to see what people would recommend. it fails epically.
haha i love stories that make the authors cry because then it just feels like the readers should cry too because there is just that much emotion in it
awe what story?
and yeah my mother isn't allowed near my stories so I'm pretty good with that. though I am working on a story like that in a way, but I'm making the guy work for it and having to deal with other components.
haha yeah, i really don't see the point in them having sex like the night they meet each other. I mean, I want my characters to be relate-able, but not to a whore. more to the normal girl whose like battling with their own lives plus having a crush on a guy. and haha yeah, some of them are incomplete, and kind of crappy like the very first one I've written was The Rev That Saved Me, and that was like the same night I found out Jimmy died so it's rough around the edges.
welcome :) and yeah same with me. like my friends hate it cause they'll read it and help me edit it, but they're always like 'Ashley, so much sexual tension!' and I just laugh and go 'Yep, boys have to work for it.' hehe
yeah, i'm not exactly a big fan of whoring out girls. and if I notice i'm doing it i pull it back and make the character's background known, that way they don't seem like a whore that much. btw i kind of pimped out your profile on one of my stories and said you were an awesome writer. just thought i should tell you ;)