Kevinthaninja / Comments

hey i tried commenting on one of your poems (just like the rest), but for some reason it doesn't work for me when i try posting on people's poems, so i just thought i'd copy and paste it here if that's cool.

"whoa. i love the last two lines of this "move on with your show of lights, see how many other birds take flight."
Sadly, I feel like sometimes people act like this. They are just a "show of lights". They show their "lights" to individuals, who then fall in love with their lights and become mesmerized by the glow, and then the person takes their light away from the viewer without fully considering what they did to them in the first place."

go little boy on the beach! lol hi im kea:)

Dude!!! It's been 9 days since you last wrote something!!!
You said not as many poems (okay) Because your working on two stories
But no new story updates, or new poems.... so therefore it's one of the other....... so I want to read your stuff!

Mkayy??? So thanks for letting your twinn here know when you DO actually write something!!!

thanx. i'll go check it out. i got 2 new ones also.

tell me when u write a new poem. i read ur latest and it's amazin. i love it. i have lot to read also if you'd like to read them.

I think I'd just like to say that your poems are pretty fuckking cool, and I can relate to them, which just makes them that much better. To have a love that strong is astounding. You give me hope.

Hey, I just wanted to say (instead of leaving a comment on EVERY poem) that you're a great poet and I can strongly relate to them. :)

Yeah! I've had a purity ring for a while. :)

HEY
MY STORY FROM YOUR PROMPT IS NOW UP ON MY PAGE.
READ IT.
LOVE IT.
TAKE IT OUT TO DINNER.
PROPOSE.
MARRY IT.
BARE ITS CHILDREN.
BE PROUD OF IT.

I know you don't comment talk, as you said in your about me, but I just wanted to tell you how great your poem You did this to me was. (: I can relate (only it was a guy in my situation), so yeah.

Hey, what's up?

Hey.
Im Tori. : )

Kevin i just wanted to say i love you

thank youuuuu~ <3

hello
what have you been up to??

Okay Dokay ^_^!!!
By the way I am I loving the Skillet shirt in your photo =DD

Can we at least be friends!?? -holds hand out-
????

Totally no. I'll add one later, aiight?

D00D. LOVE ME.

all of your poems are amazing x]