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No offense take, don't worry. I'm a big supporter of people being allowed to share their opinion - as long as it's not ... well, offfending. And I know Ellen Hopkins, she's good. I do try to write poems without structure now and then, but sometimes a structure just sneaks in, because I start to see a system take it's form in what I'm writing, so yea.. ;3

Thanks for the feedback on "Numb".
Yea, I know, but I'm really a "structured" humanbeing,
so I'm having a pretty hard time doing something without a 'system',
it makes me feel all bad, actually. But I will work on it, though.

Ha ha awesome. That blows. I dont have exams till may thank god! But feel yea on how not being able to be on here, my ap math 110 is kickin my ass :/ but no i dont have ideas yet for the collab. I'll talk to you later my Eng.106 teacher is staring at me now. We're on the author Marie de France :D I'll hit u up later. Peace!

Haha, okay :)

So how're you?

Haha aw thanks. I found it :)

No problem :) Thanks so much by the way and that story was called... hmm... something about Stereotyped... Stereotyped To The Point Of Extinction... I think. lol. I feel cool not knowing the name of my own story :)

no...most days i dont look like that...

im not yoda, and 'stay with me' was good

hmm, well, in that case, chek it i shall

yew dont seem like an ass, i know too much about sleep deprivation...ill check out yewrs sometime soon, if yew keep talking to meh so i remember
and thanks

Ha ha no prob! but im def down to to a collab wit ya :)

the main phrase/theme that it was based on was a "ill only love you when youre dead"
it comes from a album plotline of injury and being a victum, hurt, and abandoned, so this is one of the spin offs where it turns around and shows what true power that 'kid' is, and how dead wrong they were

that seems to fit...

Hey!, anything is good enough! Don't ever doubt that.

Heyy :) thanks for commenting on my poem. And it's fine that you didn't get back to me for a while on my comment on your poem. Also thanks for saying i'm an amazing poet, you are too! I really injoy reading your poems, and hope to see some more soon! :)

So i wrote this whole thing to say to you buuuuut my laptop ran out of battery ha ha.
But I'll sum up what i wanted to say. In my opinion, improve on you for yourself. Nothing drastic. Your a poet. Poets improve themselves and their work by lving and experiencing life. You have your own artistic ways. You have a unique mind, dont lose it :) Your work is great to you and to those that appreciate it. Those that think highly of themselves and say that its just words mixed together are probably blown away buy it and deep down like it. Do you nothing else. Keep up the good work girly cuz you made me a fan of your work.

hahaahaah thanks! (:

You read it in 3 days wow you must be a fast reader. Well I bet I could read it in 4-5 if I really like it. So I have to check out Wuthering Heights and ellen hopkins! Just a few more weeks and should get to get some Christmas presents so I can get some books! Ellen is a writer a novelist yes?

Oooh yeah that be great! :D Hamlet is a hard read though with all the Old English you have to translate while you read it but still is very excellent.

i dont mind the mini rant. you show that your appreciate when people comment and read your stuff so thats ok. youre an amazing writer and id like to read more of your work. if you read mine let me know what you think please. (: