see.. that's where my brilliant mind (sometimes) came into play. some of the ideas a freaking HORRIBLE, but the end.. is a doozy (sp?). i can't wait to write it!!
i should be answering your question in the next chapter or two :)
see, i wrote this story down like years ago, and it's so immature and crap, but i had some AMAZING ideas. I'm trying to re-write it and throw in stuff from the one i wrote, but make it more mature. like.. i think i had it so Dante couldn't touch her because she was married to Caleb or some crap.. i don't know. i was weird. anyway. yes, the beginning sucked. horribly. but that's life.
more of what he intends to do is going to be in one of the next two chapters, promise (:
hahahaha well, you can always tell when my brain gets slow because the chapters get slow! hopefully i can keep that from happening. i guess that means it's time to change my music selection because i take a lot of inspiration from music. :D
NIA: I totally know what you mean. I've written short stories that I've wanted to make into long stories and make them perfect. I don't post them though...:)
Mrs Love: hahaha I understand that too! You start writing and it ends up going somewhere you weren't expecting. I kind of like it because sometimes that's how I get over writers block:)
and I know what you mean about comments! I mean honestly, what am I supposed to say to "Love it update!!!" for the four thousandth time.
Maroon 5 is amazing:) and I actually don't know what channel the Voice is on. I've only seen a few episodes. But I love the whole concept of the show like how they can't see the person singing so they have to decide if they want them based on their voice. But I never have time to watch it, it comes on on Mondays and I'm always way busy on Mondays...so yeah.
hahaha yeah, i just got notification yesterday. i really appreciate it! i feel at times like it just sucks and it's not that good, but to be reviewed like that it really amps me up to finish writing it :D
OMG!!!!! I AM SOOOO SOOOO SOOO SORRY I HAVEN'T BEEN ON HERE IN FOREVER!!! MY SISTER'S POWER CORD FOR HER LAPTOP WASN'T WORKING (SO WE COULDN'T USE THE LAPTOP OR THE BATTERY WOULD DIE) SO WE HAD TO SEND IT OFF TO THE COMPANY TO GET IN FIXED AND IT TOOK FOREVER!! I AM SOOOO SOOOO SOOO SORRRY!!!!! TO MAKE IT UP I'M GONNA GO UPDATE "LOVE MESSES YOU UP" AND "SECRETS"! I AM SOOOO SOOOO SOOO SORRRY!!!!! :) :) <3 I AM SOOOO SOOOO SOOO SORRRY!!!!! <3
i'm almost done writing the first chapter, but i have the summary up and everything. it's pretty good so far :)
oh my gosh, one time my characters decided to do that and they forgot the stinking condom, so we had to do a chapter listening to that stupid baby crying and we kept having to stop and feed it and burp it. ugh.
Hey I know I've had so many contests that I never had time to go back and actually read the stories, etc but I finally found time for a contest so check out my Allstar Weekend Fan Fiction contest :D Prizes will be announced later on! http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/174435/ :D