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  • ComeOnCloser

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    Hey(:
    I have a story up right now called 'Don't Get Lsot in Heaven' it's an Oliver Sykes story and it has a sequel called 'Kids With Guns' if you would like to read them, feel free, and if you do read them please leave a comment letting me know what you think.
    Negative and possitive feedback are both welcomed:3
    July 28th, 2011 at 10:00am
  • therumour

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    Thanks so much for your comment. C: On the direct speech thing, that was very intentional. I think authors use dialogue too much? To the point where that tells the whole story. And I don't really like that. So I was sort of using the indirect speech to sort of make a point in my own mind.
    July 25th, 2011 at 09:48am
  • Untold Story

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    About to hang out with my best friend once I get my lazy ass off of my laptop. Lol. You?
    July 18th, 2011 at 04:44pm
  • Untold Story

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    I've been okay-ish. Lol. What about you?
    July 15th, 2011 at 07:41pm
  • Untold Story

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    Hey! What's been up? It's been awhile
    July 14th, 2011 at 04:40pm
  • summer's pathetic.

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    Course:)

    http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/167327/
    June 2nd, 2011 at 08:35pm
  • summer's pathetic.

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    Thanks for joining my contest:)
    I hope your entry is coming soon. :3
    June 2nd, 2011 at 07:14pm
  • NothingLeftToGive

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    dragon fruits? O.o
    no it names is cool :D
    May 3rd, 2011 at 05:03pm
  • NothingLeftToGive

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    haha well it's good^^
    how r u?
    May 2nd, 2011 at 09:06pm
  • NothingLeftToGive

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    hahaha Thats a good one XP
    only this u made?
    May 2nd, 2011 at 03:37pm
  • NothingLeftToGive

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    Of course, you'll find someone better :)
    heres a joke : Once upon a time there were two muffins in the microwave. Suddenly, on of the muffins says:
    "Man it's hot in here!!!!"
    The other muffin exclaims,
    "Look a talking muffin!!!!"
    May 1st, 2011 at 08:36pm
  • NothingLeftToGive

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    Oh god he's such an asshole! >__<
    May 1st, 2011 at 08:30pm
  • NothingLeftToGive

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    Oh sorry for that XS
    he's a loser
    May 1st, 2011 at 08:05pm
  • NothingLeftToGive

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    i don't do intersting stuff >_<
    well i went ice skating! but i didn't skate i just watched my sisters skate :"( u?
    May 1st, 2011 at 07:03pm
  • MainstreamMusic

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    im fine
    May 1st, 2011 at 06:27pm
  • MainstreamMusic

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    sup' im MoMo
    May 1st, 2011 at 06:07pm
  • NothingLeftToGive

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    ya all brothers r like that D:
    Thanx :3 i like ur profile
    May 1st, 2011 at 05:49pm
  • NothingLeftToGive

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    well its night here^^ good u
    May 1st, 2011 at 05:33pm
  • NothingLeftToGive

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    hello again^^
    good morning :D if its morning there!
    May 1st, 2011 at 05:28pm
  • NothingLeftToGive

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    hey there :D
    May 1st, 2011 at 12:01pm