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  • Lady.V.

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    Don't mention it. I didn't know you had an account here, i searched with tags ''vampire'' and found your story on here. I really like it.
    I hope you deal with your problems and everything goes well. :-)
    August 23rd, 2011 at 06:00am
  • Lady.V.

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    Hey, i've readen your story: The Vampire's Last Slave on quizilla and i loved it. Now i'll check the sequel here and of course I'll subscribe.
    Nice to meet you by the way, I'm Marian. +_+
    August 23rd, 2011 at 01:50am
  • choirgirlx3

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    Really really!!!
    July 7th, 2011 at 07:00am
  • MyChemicalMonBon

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    Hey :)
    I was readying your storied Kidnapped By An Assassin and It's so GOOD and addicting! I love the story line and its very well written
    :)
    July 3rd, 2011 at 05:25am
  • meilishezhe

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    I'm not saying that the sex is inappropriate to the story, just that there is a lot of it. No insult meant.
    July 1st, 2011 at 06:57pm
  • rivals are insane

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    no problem :D
    May 29th, 2011 at 09:21pm
  • ScarletHearts

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    i hope you feel better soon :)
    May 19th, 2011 at 02:25am
  • Goldyfish

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    GET BETTER SOON!!!
    May 15th, 2011 at 02:10am
  • angel2rock

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    I'm sorry to hear that you are in the hospital. I hope you get better soon! and thank you for replying to my comment. That was nice. Some people dont do that. =D
    May 12th, 2011 at 04:48am
  • rivals are insane

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    no problem :D
    April 26th, 2011 at 07:50am
  • SoccergirlBianca

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    Your story Kidnapped By An Assassin is really good.
    April 26th, 2011 at 01:02am
  • HarryPotterGenration

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    aghhh were have u been!!!
    March 27th, 2011 at 09:42pm
  • simple'nsolo

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    Damn you!
    MORE CHAPTERS
    i have nothing else to read!!! :(
    March 14th, 2011 at 02:22am
  • rivals are insane

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    no problem :D
    February 20th, 2011 at 08:53pm
  • HarryPotterGenration

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    Hey I know your probebly busy but let me know when you are gonna write more ok
    February 15th, 2011 at 10:42pm
  • EscapingTheFate

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    Well I'm glad cause every word of its true.
    February 12th, 2011 at 04:11pm
  • EscapingTheFate

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    You are very welcome. You're an extremely talented writer with the potential to actually get published.
    February 11th, 2011 at 03:13am
  • moonie76

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    I meant the bones OF a good story. Again, just add some more sex and violence, lol. You are talented.
    February 10th, 2011 at 04:09pm
  • moonie76

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    I just read the vampire's last slave. I have to give some advice. I liked the ideas, loved the beginning, but you lost me in the final few chapters. There were hints of drama, but not enough. My advice would be to get him evil again and to add more suspense. You also need some more decent sex scenes to make it a real NC17. I would love to see his evil side come back out and for him to only show his soft side to her. Have him kill the other girl who wants him in front of his wife. I dunno, just beef it up a bit. Have him kill a few more slaves, maybe with her? You have the bones off a good, dark story here.
    February 10th, 2011 at 03:55pm
  • shelbie.marie

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    i just got really happy(:
    i will defently read it
    February 10th, 2011 at 12:57am
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