Hello again people of Mibba! I just wanted to put out there about my story, "Hollywood Oh Hollywood, Catch Me When I Fall". I am currently working on the third chapter for it, and I really need some help in the form of comments. Maybe how to write this one, or change it up. Also, should I have different point of views or not? Help Mibba, I'm not as great as I try to be! x] If anyone could point...

Boo ya!What's up people!!! I'm new here and I think this place is Heaven. ;) I'm only writing this to put myself out there a bit, showing people I'm here and I'm new and I'm awesome. Oh, and I'm hyper. Hehe. :)Sorry if this goes against rules, if it does tell me and I'll delete it...but you might just make me cry if you do. *Offers you cookie* See that cookie? It could fulfill your dreams.Be my...