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Same here. I know something else she's in but I can't remember what...like 8 simple rules for dating my daughter or something like that. That's what my mom said anyway.

Then I suppose I should watch all those series then. All I know about the big bang theory is that there is a girl in it named Penny who is played by Kaley Cuoco or however you spell it. She played Billie in a series called Charmed and Brandy in Brandy and Mr. Whiskers. I love that cartoon.

thank u sooo much for the story comment! :) I've actually seen none of those shows but i'v heard of them and i only watched like half of the sherlock holmes movie. I actually based Blackwell off of a character from an anime and House from...House.

Well, thank you for the criticism, I sometimes forget spell check, sorry. And I must read your story sometime, it seems as though we have very similar ideas in the both of our :)

Amy,
To answer your questions, I chose the name Xavier because I thought it was very unique and matched his character. I chose for these two characters to be together because most of the point of the story is that homosexuality, nor loving the same sex, should be a sin, which is why you don't see that it's mentioned as a sin in the story. It's just as normal as anything else. That's how I'd like it to be at least. Basically it's just a forbidden love story that I came up with that expresses my ideas and kind of hits close to home.

I hope that answers your questions.

Do you like the story?

I just found the Netherlands a really intriguing place. Also, since (according to wikipedia) over 60% of the population speaks English and there's such an emphasis on being multilingual there, I thought it was a good place to have an internship with a collection of students from different countries.

Thank you so much for your comments on PoG! And I will definitely be enlisting your help on better writing on the Netherlands. I pride myself on my writing being very realistic, so if you see any other errors regarding the atmosphere let me know! :)

thank you for the comment!
about skipping on the parts where Maryna is supposed to think, I tried to keep it in Devin's point of view. Like until the story is more developed and there's more chapters to it, her point of view comes out. But she's supposed to be creepy like that, letting random guys follow her, haha. I didn't know how to portray her in a weird-enough way.